Picturebook Study: This Moose Belongs To Me by Oliver Jeffers

This Moose Belongs To Me

 

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I’ve recently re-read Anatomy of Story by John Truby, in which we question the advice dished out to storytellers everywhere: Three act structure. Instead we have 22 steps (for your average film), more steps for novels, and 7 or more steps for short stories. Picture books are not mentioned, but we’re told that all stories — whatever their form — have at least those minimum seven steps. My daughter just happened to get this book for Christmas. So let’s see…

WEAKNESS/NEED

PSYCHOLOGICAL NEED

Wilfred is lonely.

MORAL NEED

Wilfred is controlling.

DESIRE IN THIS STORY

Wilfred desires some company in the form of an obedient pet. This character is a riff on the Crazy Cat Lady trope, in which a character also likes to collect animals. There’s also a bit of Kindnapper in there, too.

OPPONENT

Wilfred’s opponent is the moose, who wants to do its own thing.

Another opponent is the old lady who, like Wilfred, has named the moose and claimed it as her own. The best opponents want the same thing as your hero, so this is a particularly funny example. Also, the ‘inverse’ of a little boy is an old lady, so she looks different, but she is exactly the same.

PLAN

Wilfred’s plan is to basically follow the moose around. But he also has a fairly detailed plan, seen partly in the illustrations: He will put a name tag on the moose’s antler and write a list of rules for the moose to follow. That’s his first plan. But he has to modify his plan slightly because he has a poor sense of direction. In order to not get lost, he’ll roll out a ball of string.

BATTLE

Wilfred’s battle is between himself and nature ( of which the moose is a part). He is lost and stranded and at the mercy of the ‘monsters’. This is the very worst thing that could possibly happen to our hero.

SELF-REVELATION

PSYCHOLOGICAL EPIPHANY

He can avoid feeling lonely by simply being with the moose.

MORAL EPIPHANY

But he doesn’t have to control it. Wilfred realises that animals have minds of their own, and that they don’t exist for his personal amusement and convenience.

NEW EQUILIBRIUM

The moose will continue to listen to Wilfred but only when he feels like it.

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So there we have it. This best selling picture book fits the seven steps of storytelling perfectly.

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